Sunday, April 27, 2008

Haiku: Theme undecided

I am still catching up - then I will have regular entries and themes. These are the ones in the beginning which only used the word of the day, but was without theme.

Word: Noctilucent 

By Debbie
Noctilicent white
Into the night my crane flies
Silent drifting down

By Sarah
Head craned out window
Rain drowns me in chilled silence 
Cold keeps me awake

(I was being a smartass using the word "crane")

Noctilucent eyes
Penetrating kiss
Only for tonight

Bonus because I was, at the time, feeling poetic....

Hard saying goodbye
Shall we ever meet again?
Your scent fades from me

Damned the heart and mind
Catharsis lost on Sarah
Attachments cause grief

Response by Debbie:
If ever alone
Let my heart be ripped away
Allow me solitude

Response to Debbie by Sarah
Solitude in twos
Lonely twin souls shall comfort
Spared of lonely night?

We were a couple of cheerful women that day.....




2 comments:

Faerylandmom said...

:-D Good stuff.

löki gale said...

Remember those Haikus we wrote at the Bear Tooth while waiting for the movie to start?

We never did send them in..